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Prompt Contest Entry. Inspired by Come away with me, Norah Jones, GREAT song. I envision the adventure she talks about escaping at night and bought it in a visual poem
Lets hide in the rivers sigh
As its silent walk flows on
From the waterfall to fly
Caught by feathers flown upon
We’ll glide then to the trees peak
Turn heads of every owl
Hearing the lonely moon speak
With every wolves last howl
Resting in the spring beds, free
Each daisy swept with dew
The night you came away with me
And I, away with you.
Lets hide in the rivers sigh
As its silent walk flows on
From the waterfall to fly
Caught by feathers flown upon
We’ll glide then to the trees peak
Turn heads of every owl
Hearing the lonely moon speak
With every wolves last howl
Resting in the spring beds, free
Each daisy swept with dew
The night you came away with me
And I, away with you.
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You know, this is structured almost identically to a sonnet, only with 12 lines instead of 14. You may be good at sonnets.
Rules of a Sonnet:
1.They are written in iambic pentameter.
2. They are fourteen lines long.
3. They have a set rhyme scheme.
4. They have a turn or “volta.”
5. They all bear the name “sonnet.”
Rules of a Sonnet:
1.They are written in iambic pentameter.
2. They are fourteen lines long.
3. They have a set rhyme scheme.
4. They have a turn or “volta.”
5. They all bear the name “sonnet.”